Talk:Walnut High School

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[edit] Vision

We envision Walnut High School as an integrated learning center involving the collaborative efforts of staff, students, and the community in the process of education. This safe and secure environment will promote life-long learning and critical thinking and decision making skills for our students. Respect for diversity in language and culture, an appreciation of the arts, and the use of technology will empower and prepare students for their futures.Our graduates will leave with an increased awareness of their own worth, as well as the value of others, and will be prepared to participate effectively in and contribute to the diverse society of the 21st century.

I have removed the above, as it is clear advertising. I think the article needs some more editing, as it still reads quite like an advertisement. Frexes 22:22, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] definite advertising

the whole thing needs to be rewritten from top to bottom

Agreed, unless the author can find some independent sources for the statistics that are quoted they should be deleted. TDIPete 22:50, 5 April 2007 (UTC)