Talk:Walden Two

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Need source citations mostly I think. I kinda blew them all away. Erk!

--Michaelrayw2 (talk) 04:32, 26 December 2007 (UTC)

This "book review" is a bit biased. Not that I like cults or anything, but you could at the very least make it less obvious that you don't like Skinner. I also don't like the description of why they have children and marry at such a young age, and this article fail to mention many of their other ideas about family that would be helpful to explain why their society can manage.

96.235.237.233 (talk) 20:19, 14 April 2008 (UTC)

I'm also concerned this reads a little like a book review, without many references. That's a bit of a vague criticism though... so to start with something concrete, I've just tagged some sentences presented as facts that lack references and also tagged some weasel-worded sentences that are difficult to substantiate and might be seen as speculation or original research. --Ds13 (talk) 21:59, 21 April 2008 (UTC)