Talk:Voyage of the Damned (Doctor Who)/GA1

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[edit] GA Review

  • "sabotages the ship shortly after the Titanic's collision with the TARDIS." --> "...shortly after its collision..." might read better.
  • "beaten only by the episode of EastEnders which aired immediately after the episode" - repetition of "episode"... and does the EastEnders ep. have a name?
    • Same in Broadcast section.
  • Showgirl (as in, the Kylie tour) shouldn't have italics.
  • The stuff in quotation marks in the Writing section needs direct citation.
    • They are group-referenced at the end.
  • Ref 25; reliable source?
  • "The organisation Christian Voice expressed offence at the religious imagery of a scene in which the Doctor is lifted through the ship by robot angels;" - I had to check the ref to find why it pissed them off (messiah portrayal), so you probably should say so somewhere.

Rest looks good. Leave me a note when done. Cheers, giggy (:O) 06:18, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

    • With regards to ref 25; Yes, Outpost Gallifrey has a reliable reputation as a news aggregator in this field; they have press-access to various sources like BARB and the BBC. — Edokter • Talk • 13:09, 8 June 2008 (UTC)