User talk:Vlasime

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[edit] Welcome!

Welcome...

Hello, Vlasime, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically produce your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and ask your question there. Again, welcome!  Chzz  ►  13:24, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Cleaning up

Hi again!

Thanks for doing all that work to clean the articles. I'l like to help a little if I can; I think the English needs a bit of work, but I need to check a few things before I can help;

If you can answer these questions, I'd be happy to improve the English in the articles.

(1) re. z Vlašime - Is this a 'family name'? Which 'area' does it come from - I know that areas have changed so much in that part of the world; is it from the Carolingian Empire perhaps?

(2) Re. the references - which language are they in?

(3) Jan Očko z Vlašime, Paul z Vlasime and Vanek z Jenstejna - do you have dates for when they were born and died?

(4) Jan Očko z Vlašime - in the title of the page, the last 'e' does not have an accent mark, but within the article it's spelt Jan Očko z Vlašimě - which is correct?

I might have more questions later,

Thanks!

--  Chzz  ►  18:05, 2 June 2008 (UTC)

Trying to tidy up

I've tried to improve z Vlašime.

Of course, I don't know the subject area, and may well have got things wrong, but I hope my edits will help you in improving this, and the other, articles.

I've rewritten the first part to try to describe the topic. If 'Bohemian' is not the correct term, then I apologise; of course feel free to change anything.

I've changed references to a section (which is normal on wikipedia), and added a 'see also' section.

I've tried to improve the references, using a template. Because I don't speak czech, there may well be errors in this, but I hope it will help show you a good way of writing the citations. For further information on this, see Template:Citation

I really hope this helps you improve this and the other articles; again, sorry if I've done anything incorrect - you can of course change it all back!

Regards, --  Chzz  ►  21:20, 2 June 2008 (UTC)