Talk:Virtual Villagers
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What should a player do with bones?
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[edit] VV3
Ok this part sounds dumb:
According to the official website of the game, there will be a 3rd chapter. It will be unnamed until the creator of the game finds the chapter's name.
The last sentance is an unofficial claim, and the game is PROBABLY still in the works. I'm changing this.
And to anwser the question above: when you can get a graveyard, click on the bones. Also, Wikipedia is not a help line for the games; just to provide info about them. Also: click the + sign to add a new comment, don't go to edit this page. AND SIGN YOUR POSTS! four Tildes. ~. That's a tilde. Bryse 06:52, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
[edit] WP:VG Assessment
- Lead section too short per WP:LS.
- Paragraphs are too short throughout the whole article. Include more sentences in a single paragraph.
- Some sections are too short to be their own section. Either delete the sections and incorporate the information in the lead, or expand them to two full paragraphs at least.
- Puzzles and real time belong under gameplay, the section headers can simply be removed.
- The chapters section leaves three crucial questions unanswered: what is a chapter, how does a game released in chapters work and in what way is that different from a sequel or expansion pack?
- There are no citations or references in the article. This is required per WP:ATT, WP:OR, WP:V and WP:RS (policy madness - choose your own!). Especially the section on awards needs citations - for proof, simply.
- There is no "Reception" section. Make one that discusses the previews and reviews of the game.
- I think the "casualgameguides.com" link does not fit WP:EL and should be removed.
Rated Stub-class, Low importance. --User:Krator (t c) 15:25, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
- There is no "Reception" section. Make one that discusses the previews and reviews of the game.
There IS no pre/reviews.
- The chapters section leaves three crucial questions unanswered: what is a chapter, how does a game released in chapters work and in what way is that different from a sequel or expansion pack?
Strategy guide material.There is only a sequel...24.32.85.95 10:25, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Websites for citations (temporary section)
I'm dumping external links to useful sites here to avoid spamming the external links of the article further (and move the ones from there too). Once the citations have been made/potential cites have been discounted, I'll remove this section. Links:
- Game Tunnel developer interview
- Commonsense Media's The Lost Children review
- Game Tunnel's review of The Lost Children
- About.com's review of The Lost Children
- Inside Mac Games' review of The Lost Children
- GameZebo's preview of The Lost Children
- Casual Review's review of The Lost Children
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