Talk:Virginia Glee Club/Comments
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[edit] March 23, 2008
Overall, I would describe this as a nicely developed solid B-class article. In particular, I am impressed with the quality of the referencing.
From a presentation perspective, the article should have an infobox - perhaps {{Infobox musical artist}}? A more current picture would certainly be a plus, and this would allow moving the current image to the history section where it would fit perfectly. However, there are always challenges in getting appropriate and free images, so this may be a longer term project.
In terms of content, what is in the article is great. The prose is good, and the referencing is excellent. I would say the main need would be a section on the music itself. The lead section mentions the TTBB arrangement, and this should be discussed and expanded in a section discussing the club's musical style or traditions. Something to substantiate the lead's claim that the club is critically acclaimed should also be added, either in the section on the music or in a critical reception section. Finally, the lead could use a little more expansion, per WP:LEAD.
