Talk:Very erotic very violent

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Articles for deletion This article was nominated for deletion 18/3/2008. The result of discussion was Speedy Keep.

[edit] Clarify

I tagged three sentences in this article with {{clarify}} because I did not fully understand them:

  1. Personal information of the. That's not a complete sentence.
  2. ... in the Chinese language, the words for "yellow" and "erotic" share similar pronunciations. Does this apply only to Mandarin or to other varieties of Chinese as well?
  3. Meanwhile some critics also pointed out that it's full of Kuso during internet, which acts as collectivity violence, cultural oaf. This sentence, particularly the last four words, just does not make sense in English. --Metropolitan90 (talk) 04:04, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

fixed the first one, I never noticed that I forgot to fill the rest of that in as an oversight. ViperSnake151 15:21, 18 March 2008 (UTC)