Talk:Vegan Outreach

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[edit] Tone of article

Its a good, detailed article, but perhaps a bit too detailed when it comes to things like naming every employee, as if the world needs/wants to know this. It makes it look like a VO person wrote it (which, not meaning to be unkind, they probably did!) and overall lowers the encyclopedic tone. Trimming it down a bit would improve the readability and gravitas.

IceDragon64 (talk) 22:11, 4 May 2008 (UTC)