Talk:Val Young

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[edit] NPOV, wikification, and verification

I think this article has some NPOV issues. It seems quite biased towards the artist.

Also, my wikification is not always perfect, so if someone would check it, I'd greatly appreciate it.

Another thing is that this article cites no sources, and I believe that it should, so I added {{not verified}}.

> Iridescence < ^( talk )_{( contrib )} 23:36, 16 April 2006 (UTC)

Pictures please :F--84.250.27.36 22:11, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Adjustments

I fixed sentence structure, removed Wiki links for nonexistent Wiki articles, changed quotation marks (for song and CD titles) to italics , changed the heading "Recent times" to "Recent engagements" and, finally, added the fact that Ms. Young is based in Los Angeles now. She left Detroit long ago. Nyannrunning (talk) 02:57, 15 May 2008 (UTC)