Talk:Usher syndrome
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[edit] Comments
WillowW asked me to drop by and comment on this article. I am posting my comments here.
Lead
- "gene therapy seems promising" - As someone with a disease for which "gene therapy seems promising", that phrase rings empty, I can tell you. Perhaps something a little more specific?
- The qualifier pigmentosa reflects the fact that clumps of pigment may be visible by an ophthalmoscope in advanced stages of degeneration. - Fascinating as this tidbit is, I think it belongs in the body of the article, not the lead.
- Depending on which gene is mutated, the syndrome takes different forms; three main sub-types are recognized, denoted Usher I, II and III in order of decreasing severity. - This seemed a little odd to me - are the forms not different enough to have different names?
- I wonder if it is necessary to explain what recessive means in the lead. That seemed a bit tangential to me. Again, important in the body of the article, but not necessarily in the lead as it is not specific to Usher syndrome itself.
- The "potential cures" paragraph I have just created should probably be expanded. Many of the readers coming to this page will be people with the disease or people who now know someone with it. That is information that will interest them in particular.
Article body
- I suppose we don't have figures for Usher syndrome from any other part of the world?
- Why are the people born with Usher III in Finland and Birmingham?
- Why is Usher's severity defined by deafness and not blindness?
- The hearing impairment associated with Usher syndrome is better understood: damaged hair cells in the cochlea of the inner ear inhibit electrical impulses from reaching the brain. - check this rewriting
- What do you think about an appropriate diagram of the eye or ear in the "Symtoms and subtypes" section, rather than the genetic chart, which seems more appropriate to the "Genetics" section?
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- I completely agree, although I'd need to find/make such diagrams, which could be hard for me. Pigmentosa aside, I think the damage may only be visible only microscopically, on the level of cells or between cells, so the macroscopic anatomy of the ear or eye might not be that useful. Willow (talk) 16:02, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
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- The "History" seems to interrupt the flow of the article - I would either put it first or last in the article.
- I didn't understand the first two paragraphs of "Subtypes and genetic causes". The sentences were a bit convoluted and I think that I just got lost amid the concepts, too. I think much more explanation is required there.
- I would add more on the "gene therapy" section.
- The "Individual cases" section seems a bit listy to me. Why not make "List of people with Usher's syndrome" like "List of people with epilepsy". I'm not sure I really like these lists, but people make them.
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- This probably tells more about me than about the disease. :( Given the challenge of living without both hearing and sight, I wanted readers to know that people still live incredibly productive lives and meet that challenge head-on. The Spencer Tracy connection is relevant, because a major center was opened to help children living with Usher syndrome. Willow (talk) 16:02, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
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- The page should have a section like "Treatments" or, if there aren't any, "Living with Usher Syndrome". You might look at Tourette syndrome, Asperger syndrome, and Autism. They are all FAs and seem to have similar layouts - they have sections entitled "Epidemiology", for example.
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- A great idea that I haven't gotten to as yet. I might be able to move some people from the "Individual cases" section to "Living with Usher syndrome".
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I hope this was helpful. Awadewit | talk 20:41, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Cochlear implants
However, a mis-diagnosis can have bad consequences, e.g., if the parents elect to give the child cochlear implants.
What are the bad consequences? I don't understand - would the implants not work if the child actually has Usher syndrome? Or would they just miss the blindness yet to come (in which case the consequences aren't really worse because they would have become blind regardless)? 70.130.233.237 (talk) 03:07, 18 May 2008 (UTC)