Talk:Ur-Quan

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This article was nominated for deletion on 2007-07-22. The result of the discussion was keep.

[edit] Merge?

Shouldn't this article be merged into Ur-Quan Kzer-Za? As I recall it, the second game always referred to them simply as the Ur-Quan, with the Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah always being referred to as the Kor-Ah. Anyone just searching for Ur-Quan on Wikipedia is almost certainly looking for the article on the Kzer-Za, which already contains most of the information here (in fact, glancing at it it looks like it contains all of the information here, rendering this article completely redundant.) The fact that they were actually one race and that the Kor-Ah were also Ur-Quan was just a plot point; outside of the dialogs that explained that background, "Ur-Quan" alone is always used to refer exclusively to the Kzer-Za, while the term "Kzer-Za" was essentially never used. Aquillion 07:24, 17 September 2005 (UTC)

Should Eternal Doctrine and Path of Now and Forever also be merged into this article and redirected here? RJFJR 23:40, 2 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Mediocre writing

It's really quite bad how the author of this page told the story of the Ur-Quan. Striving not to look like he's plagiarising the actual in-game content (which failed rather badly), he/she robbed the telling of most of its story-likeness. This looks like a police report, not something told in the presence of an open fire, to fascinated listeners. Single-verb sentences aren't really good for keeping the reader interested, you know. Someone PLEASE rewrite this?

--AbuDhabi

Why don't you rewrite it?

Agreed, why dont you show us how it should be done instead of criticising?