Talk:Tropical Storm Emilia (2006)

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Needs major copyedit for B-class, lots of spelling and usage errors (hand should be had, for instance). --Coredesat 21:02, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Get rid of the storm history from the lede. Get rid of the downgrade of wind speeds - not notable for the lede. Fix capitalisation issues with non-proper nouns (the watches and warnings). Fix citations, don't dump all at the end of a chunk of text. Your references do not match - no. 15, for example ("High pressures and moisture affected parts of Nevada, Utah and Arizona on July 27, as Emilia traveled up the Baja coast.[15]"), does NOT mention anything about "high pressures and moisture". Did you make it up, like how you made up the winds? – Chacor 06:29, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

(edit conflict) Forget B-class, this should probably be merged. It has too much extraneous stuff in it to add length (including storm history in lede), and there is some useless information in the storm history. A lot of the information is totally made up, as well (citation #15 doesn't mention high pressure, for instance). --Coredesat 06:30, 31 August 2007 (UTC)