Talk:Trinity Cheltenham
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[edit] Problems
A couple of points:
- Service times are 9.15 and 11.15 in the morning, not 9 and 11 (as stated).
- Francis Close did not found Dean Close School - it was founded by others in his memory.
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- Following addition of a link from New Wine, I found the article to be in a bit of a state. Most of the text was taken directly from the church's website (hence potential copyvio), which included the note about Francis Close. The only reference which might satisfy notability had been lost, along with the encyclopaedic introduction, the cats and the ref section.
- I have restored much of the content that had been lost since December 2007, and simplified/rewritten the rest. Some facts may, therefore, be out-of-date, as I have used an earlier version of this article and the church's website as a source. The re-write has also allowed removal of the worst aspects of advertising: service times, address details, POV, etc.
- Someone knowledgeable about the church should now take over and polish it further. Great things have been and are happening at this church, and it deserves a decent WP article to reflect this. (It is also worth following-up the articles about Neil Bennetts, since these may provide valuable additional references to support notability claims.)
- EdJogg (talk) 13:58, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
