Talk:Trimorphic Protennoia

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Under the section Mysticism the phrase "as Gnosticism was more concerned about the way the text affected people than the content of it." seems a rather egotistic statement. None of the Gnostic writers are around to ask and this statement is nothing more than a guess. Might I suggest "it seems as though some Gnostic writings are more concerned about the way the text affects people than the content of it." Wjbean 22:56, 10 April 2006 (UTC)