Talk:Transmission tower

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[edit] Corrections

Check from temporary tower onwards

done Jeeves 01:12, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)


[edit] Automatic translation?

Some parts of this page are very confusing, and almost appear to be the product of an automatic translation program. I mean no offense if it is not, but there are some parts of this article that probably should be completely elided.

  • It's hard to follow but there's clearly information there. In the beginning, the entire article was like the Maintenance section currently is, but as you can see it is now readable. Hopefully someone who can understand the maintenance section will clarify it. --Nimlot 04:41, Jun 4, 2005 (UTC)
  • I added some headers to divide up the content a bit, and moved some of the text out of the Maintenance section. -- frankh 22:13, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)

[edit] More copyediting

I did my best to fix up the prose, but I don't know much about these towers. I threw out some phrases that I just couldn't make sense of, and commented out a couple of others in case someone else wants to take a look. The article still seems to repeat some information with only minor variations in form, but I'm not knowledgeable enough in the field to determine whether or how this should be changed. Future editing could focus on trimming it down to be more concise and making the presentation of facts a little less piecemeal. Jeeves 01:12, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)

[edit] antennae?

I've never used antennae as the plural of antenna. It sounds a bit pompous. Perhaps it is correct when referring to the plural of insect antenna? Ee79 05:16, 14 Jun 2005 (UTC)


[edit] complete rewrite

This article needs a complete rewrite, as does Radio mast. I've started it at Radio masts and towers and Mast radiator and Radio masts and towers - catastrophic collapses Spliced 16:14, 14 Jun 2005 (UTC)