Talk:TownNews
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[edit] Advertisement
Of course I'm biased because I made the article, but I do not believe this reads like an advertisement. Perhaps removal of the word "state-of-the-art" as a descriptor for automation technology should be removed, but other than that I don't view it as an advertisement in the least. Ideas? - Deron Dantzler 17:34, 22 June 2006 (UTC)
- Well I modified it by removing that text and I shifted some things around. Still waiting for feedback. - Deron Dantzler 17:40, 22 June 2006 (UTC)