Talk:Toward the Light
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That looks about right now, "said to be" is better than the too-doubting "claimed", "supposed", "alleged" I'd tried out, I think. And the "according to the publisher" part was a very nice touch, though it would be nice to know the relationship between Johanne Elisabeth Agerskov and Michael Agerskov, assuming there is one, or a "(no relation)" comment after his name if not. You see two people mentioned with the same last name, you tend to wonder about these things. And thanks for the message! -- John Owens 22:14 May 12, 2003 (UTC)
[edit] The three golden fruits
This section is teeming with unverifiable claims of contact with the transcendental world. I tried to clean up some of it and tag areas that could use some work. There should be a succinct (and encyclopedic) way of stating that the account listed in that section is the claim of Agerskov, and not presented here in Wikipedia as fact.
"According to Agerskov, the first "golden fruit" turned out to be a collection of poems written by deceased Danish poets. Johanne Agerskov's spirit learned the poems by heart during her sleep..." makes it sound as though only the first statement is a claim, while the rest is all verified. Any ideas on improving this? WDavis1911 03:06, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
