User:TonyTheTiger/sandbox

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• Commas missing:
  • In March of that year,
  • However, his proposal
  • The SNAE, therefore, went
  • During his student years,
  • In 1892,
  • Meanwhile,
  • By then,
  • Thus, the idea
  • Almost every subsequent sentence is missing one. Please reread.
• "by studies" at s/b in the gerundive with either by studying or by undertaking studies
• Many terms are unfamiliar to me and would be to the general reader. I would be satisfied with a decent link for many of them. You should not have lengthy paragraphs with no links. Even those with one or two links are alarming. Also, at WP:CAPTION, the exemplary captions each have a link or two.
• Link
  • Every geographic location, land mass or body or water on its first occurrence in the article such as Weddell Sea and Russia.
  • two or three words of biological and geological specimens
  • meteorological station
  • whaler
  • £ (I am not sure what unit it represents)
  • dark room
  • the first appearance of various fields and professions such as meteorology, geology, biology, topography and terrestrial physics, botanist, geologist, bacteriologist, taxidermist. Are you talking about a seaman?
• Either fully cite the WP:LEAD or have no refs at all.
• "helping to classify specimens brought back from the Challenger Expedition" seems to modify its most proximal noun.
• Back from the Arctic in 1899 s/b After returning from the Arctic in 1899,
• then being organized by the RGS in London needs to be offset try adding ", which was"
• ", but not properly answered" s/b either ", but it was not properly answered" or "but not properly answered"
• I think {{convert|6000|fathom|ft m|sigfig=3|lk=on}} might be preferable
• What is a depth sounding? It does not have a link.
• Does skiing and sledging skills mean x-country skiing and sledding?