Talk:Tony Kiritsis
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[edit] Cleanup tag
Somebody added a cleanup tag to this article. Would that person please write a comment here and explain what needs cleaning up? (Entheta 10:19, 9 January 2006 (UTC))
I didn't add the tag, b ut I'd say the language and the writing need to worked on; at the moment, it is very formal and 'stiff' to read. I'd also say that they're needs to be something about him being involved in a hostage drama in the intro; I was reading it, and it made no sense as to why it suddenly went into hostage taking after talking about a mortgage broker. --Stretch 12:18, 14 January 2006 (UTC)
- Ok. I've added a sentence about the hostage drama in the intro. I asked in a wikiproject a while ago for some copyediting since I'm not that fluent. (Entheta 13:29, 14 January 2006 (UTC))
I WOULD JUST LIKE TO SAY, MR. KIRITSIS WAS NOT INSANE. HE WAS MAKING A POLITICAL STATEMENT, AND EVERYONE ACTED AS IF THEY DIDN'T GET IT WHEN THEY DID. TONY KIRITSIS WAS TAKEN ADVANTAGE OF BY A COUPLE OF GUYS WHO THOUGHT THEY COULD BECAUSE THEY HAD MONEY. HE WAS A HERO TO THE WORKING CLASS YOU IDIOTS. MY GRANDFATHER WAS THE SAME TYPE OF CHARACTER. FOR ONCE, HE STOOD UP TO THE UPPER CLASS AND SAID, "NO, YOU ARE NOT GOING TO TAKE WHAT I HAVE." HARDLY CRAZY. WHAT HE DID WAS RUIN WHATEVER TRUST ANY BUSINESS ASSOCIATE OF RICHARD HALL EVER HAD. AMERICA NEEDS TO WAKE UP. THE MAN WAS BEING ROBBED AND HE KNEW THE COURTS WOULD STAND BY THE BIG MONEY NO MATTER WHAT. HE WASN'T GOING TO LET IT HAPPEN. TONY WOULD NEVER HAVE HURT ANYONE. HE WAS ONLY TRYING TO PROVE A POINT. SOMETIMES A MAN HAS TO PROTECT WHAT HE HAS. IT'S WHAT MAKES US MEN. JUST LET US BE MEN.
