User talk:Tolstoy143

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[edit] NPOV and Secure Computing

I'd be willing to work with you to do an NPOV scrub of Secure Computing Corporation though I'm one of the fanboys that contributed to it. I guess I can't help the funk of fanboy though I try to be neutral. But I'd like to see the article be solid and NPOV. So if you want to take it on, you have someone to help you understand "the individual components" - just give me a call. You can find my e-mail through Google - look up "Rick Smith Authentication" Cryptosmith (Rick Smith) 04:05, 9 August 2007 (UTC)

Thanks. I would rather communicate through a dedicated section of the discussion page though. What I'll do sometime after a week (I have a corporate inspection this week) is put it through a mental sieve and highlight what might not be neutral. What one needs to ask is "Am I saying this or using these adjectives/adverbs because I feel this way personally, or because it is a tested or common fact?". I am guilty of the same thing, I've had to go back and re-edit some of my own contribs after realizing that unquantifiable adjectives such as 'excellent' or 'many' or not neutral unless they can be attributed to sort of test, survey, or expert quote. Tolstoy143 - "Quos vult perdere dementat" 20:47, 12 August 2007 (UTC)