Talk:Tim O'Shea

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[edit] Tone

The tone of the biography sounds more like a breathy booster piece for the alumni magazine than a serious encyclopedia article. Lots and lots of emotional adjectives and superlatives... Studerby 23:39, 27 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Source

Worth checking into, but is this his official biography as drafted by the athletics department. If so, doesn't that make this a violation of Wikipedia standards? It reads like a bad cut and paste job. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.145.154.52 (talk) 07:25, 28 November 2007 (UTC)