Talk:Three Mile Island (book)

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[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Btmi3.jpg

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BetacommandBot (talk) 04:19, 12 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] GA review

Hi Johnfos, For the GA review, I'd like to suggest the following:

  • Can you add something about critical reception to the lead? One sentence would be fine.
  • Can you provide a bit of background about the TMI accident itself for the reader, perhaps in the "Introduction" section? No more than a paragraph is all I'd ask.
  • Fix the fair use rationale for the image.
  • In the second quote, I'm wondering if there is a typo. Does the source read "and his discussion of the aftermath provide thoughtful" or "and his discussion of the aftermath provides thoughtful"?

(I did some copyediting which I hope is agreeable.) –Outriggr § 08:02, 18 February 2008 (UTC)

Thanks, Outriggr, for reviewing and copyediting. I plan to make the suggested improvements over the next couple of days... Johnfos (talk) 09:17, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
Have made those changes now. I've chosen a more appropriate image, and checked the second quote, which seems OK. Thanks... Johnfos (talk) 02:54, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
Hi Johnfos. When I mentioned "background", I was hoping for more of an overview of the accident--the impact it had on people. I could try to add something (just from the main article on the subject) if you want. I feel the article is a little short, but then it's a very specific topic... is there one more example of favorable or unfavorable review you could add? Also, I'm not sure the section on Author should stay because it's just a few sentences. Could it be combined with Introduction? I do apologize for coming back with more comments. –Outriggr § 01:00, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
Hi Outriggr. I've expanded the article a little in line with one of your comments, but I honestly don't feel that the article is too short. There are quite a few GAs which are shorter; Revopower is the classic example that comes to mind. And I would prefer that the author section stay separate as I think it would be confusing to do otherwise. I would be grateful if you, and any other editors, would add more to the article where you see fit... thanks, Johnfos (talk) 01:53, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
OK. I tried to do what I had in mind, and removed the blockquote for the last short quotation. I'll pass the GA now, and good job! –Outriggr § 02:31, 20 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Fact?

"First detailed historical analysis since the accident..."

I don't think that's factual. "The Warning" by Mike Gray and Ira Rosen was probably the first such work and is probably the definitive one. Since the source for this is a book review, it's probably just due to a misinformed reviewer.

Scott Johnson (talk) 12:24, 1 May 2008 (UTC)