Talk:These Days: Live in Concert

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Thanks. Dihydrogen Monoxide 01:34, 12 December 2007 (UTC)

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  • Powderfinger in concerts at Sydney Entertainment Centre, and at Fox Studios in Sydney
Lead: These Days: Live in Concert earned a mixed response from reviewers;
Response: These Days: Live in Concert was generally received well by reviewers.
  • These Days: Live in Concert was directed by Gregor Jordan,[1] who the band had worked with previously when he requested they write "These Days" for his film Two Hands.[2] Bernard Fanning also worked with Jordan on the film Ned Kelly in 2003.[3] The band worked with - remove the redundancy!
  • live performances of 14 songs, remove useless wikilinks to live and song
  • remove useless link to fans, which is a dab page anyway
  • These Days: Live in Concert was released as a CD on September 6, 2004, under the Universal Music record label. -> through the record label Universal Music
  • First 4 sentences of response are not-related and make for choppy prose, please re-write
Sorry, which sentences? Dihydrogen Monoxide 09:53, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
The first four sentences of the release and response section. M3tal H3ad (talk) 11:03, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
OK, well, I've tried to reword a bit then. Dihydrogen Monoxide 02:51, 20 December 2007 (UTC)
  • total of 8 weeks -> numbers lower than 10 are generally written out
  • Rita (song) is a redirect to Vulture Street
  • You have an external link in the See also section
  • This references THESE DAYS: POWDERFINGER LIVE IN CONCERT *** (M) -> needs to be lowercase
  • Alphabetize categories
  • didn't -> did not

That be all. M3tal H3ad (talk) 02:37, 19 December 2007 (UTC)

Coolio, pass. M3tal H3ad (talk) 02:59, 20 December 2007 (UTC)
Yay, thanks. Dihydrogen Monoxide 04:00, 20 December 2007 (UTC)