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This article has some factual errors about the novel, one of which I corrected (it was actually Andrew who appears in the title scene, not Walter) and had a typo at the end (a mixup between "see" and "sea." It needs more quotations from the actual novel. SMcCarthy29 21:28, 1 December 2007 (UTC)