Talk:The Two Mrs. Nahasapeemapetilons

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Article milestones Date Process Result November 22, 2007 Good article nominee Listed February 10, 2008 Featured topic candidate Promoted Current Status: Good article

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[edit] GA Status

The article has passed Sections 4), and 5) , corrections are needed on Sections 1), 2) 3) and 6).

Overall, the assessment is ON HOLD.

1) Style

• No split infinitives allowed on Wikipedia - Rewrite "to thoroughly enjoy"

2) Accuracy

• Introduction - Wiki-link "Hindu wedding"

• Plot Section - Rewrite and expand plot detail starting "Mrs Nahasapeemapetilon enters,,,,,," I am presuming that you all have DVD's of this episode. If you watch the episode I think you will find that Manjula's mother enters the bedroom and Apu feigns shock at Marge in bed with Homer saying "Marge ! how could you !", Marge gives a weary shrug and tells Apu "to give it up" whereupon Apu confesses to his mother and she leads him out of the room holding him by his ear.

Apu is not tired of the "charade", he is forced into the truth.

• Production Section - Explain what a "show runner" is and does.

3) Coverage

• Reception Section - Expand this section to include Hindu views on Apu, consider this article here [1]

4) Neutrality - Article is neutral in tone.

5) Stability - Article is stable without majot edit wars.

6) Photos - Two Fair Use screenshot images of the episode are used. However, the fair use template is not used. Rewrite the rationale using the fair use template found here, Template:Non-free use rationale

The corrections, as specified above, must be done within seven days. Contact me when they have been, and I shall re-assess.

Tovojolo (talk) 19:11, 22 November 2007 (UTC)

They is no rule saying that fair use images must use the rationale template (as far as I'm aware), but I'll try and fix your other concerns, although the plot doesn't really need to be expanded, just re-writen in places. Gran² 19:22, 22 November 2007 (UTC)

Okay I;ve removed the word thoroughly, corrected the plot without going into to much detail and linked the term showrunner, because a description of it would just "a person who runs the show", and that doesn't really make the sentence flow. The only other point is the reception section, which I'll try and expand. However, although the source you provided would be great for a reception section on Apu's page, it (unless I'm missing something) doesn't mention anything about this episode, so it wouldn't really be relevant. Gran² 19:38, 22 November 2007 (UTC)

I am satisfied that the corrections have been carried out and I note your concerns on those that have not been. I do not regard those as being material and so I am pleased to announce that the article has achieved GA Status.

Congratulations,

Tovojolo (talk) 20:13, 22 November 2007 (UTC)