Talk:The Stake Out

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June 9, 2008 Good article nominee Listed

[edit] GA review

Wow, Morty Seinfeld looks different. Anyway,

  • The article claims that the title is sometimes spelled "The Stakeout". Source, please.
  • The lead says that Jerry flirts with Vanessa, but the plot section says that he does not, so…?
  • Art Vandalay is mentioned in the production section, but never before.
  • It would be nice to see the 16.2 ratings in millions of viewers.
  • "featuring Elaine and Jerry"—do you mean "featuring Louis-Dreyfus and Seinfeld"?
  • "Reviews at the time gave were almost all positive"—Oh, really? Source, please. Or at least more than one positive review versus two negative reviews.

Good luck, –thedemonhog talk • edits 18:09, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

I've tried to carry out as many of the recommendations as you asked for. I am not sure who to calculate the ratings into percentages (I'm British, so I not entirely sure on the firgues and precentages of the American population) and I did have some trouble finding reviews, but I've done my best. ISD (talk) 07:11, 9 June 2008 (UTC)