Talk:The Sleepwalkers (Broch)

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[edit] Needing more copyediting

Some words and phrases I could recognize and rework into better English. But some problem items would likely be apparent only to someone (much) better versed in Deutsch. Items like 'epoque' or 'thirt' are understandable from simple pronunciation problems. But other associations will be needed to replace further misplaced words/phrases.

"He addicted a chapter of his essay The Art of the Novel (L´Art du roman) to interpretate it."

I wonder what 'addicted' might be close to? 'appended'? 'included'?

"reprehends Vienesse fin de siecle culture based on kitch"

Okay, "fin de siecle" I know, 'kitch' is likely 'kitsch', but what is the best replacement for 'reprehends'?

Thanks, I tried to make it clearer. --Mafal 11:11, 24 January 2006 (UTC)