Talk:The Naked Brothers Band: The Movie

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This article has a rambly style, it needs to be reworked! Weirdo55 14:09, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

Contents 1 Poor Writing 2 "Film" 3 The "Writers Strike" 4 POV 5 Quotations 6 Special appearances sourcing 7 Blatant Vandalism

[edit] Poor Writing

This article reads like it was written by the movie's target demographic. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 72.0.186.147iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllllllooooooooooooovenat (talk) 22:41, August 20, 2007 (UTC)

[edit] "Film"

People have been complaining that their is not a lot of info on the artical for "film." I typed an atical on them on Microsoft Word and thought about copy and pasting it to the artical to improve this a little bit. --AnnieTigerChucky 01:18, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

One thing that might work better is to paste it first here to the talk page, give other editors a chance to review, before adding it to the article. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:21, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] The "Writers Strike"

Polly Draper is a writer and actress and "the writers strike" begun, I am curious on how this was going to effect the 2nd season, is their going to be a 2nd season, had trouble finding out this info, because this would be a good thing to add on The Naked Brothers Band episodes. --AnnieTigerChucky 03:52, 10 November 2007 (UTC)

I really don't know. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 04:35, 10 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] POV

I believe I removed this POV once already, but that may have been on one of the other articles. Has Michael Wolff said he "struggled" with Tourette syndrome or that he "had" Tourette's? I don't recall him ever making a fuss about it. Unless you provide a source that he "struggled" with it, it is POV. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:50, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

ATC, if that is sourced to the NYT, it should be reworded and attributed. But this article is not the place for discussing The Tic Code, which has its own article. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:01, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Quotations

Quotation sections are discouraged, and anything worth saying should be worked into the body of the artlce. See WP:GTL#Quotations. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:01, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

Also see WP:ITALICS and WP:MOS#Quotations, quotes aren't normally italicized. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:06, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Special appearances sourcing

There's a problem with the sourcing in special appearances. For example, a lot of the appearances are sourced to the New York Times article, but it only mentions the following:

• Naked Brothers also appeals to adult stargazers. Look for cameos by the thirtysomething cast in the film, as well as by Mr. Hall, Uma Thurman, Julianne Moore, Cyndi Lauper and other stars. Snoop Dogg pops up in the first episode of the series.

Maybe the source tags are backwards? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:05, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

On any article explaining the special appearances, they only give a few examples, since there is 18 to list. But, I know I can't source "I watched it" as a reliable source, but I watched the ending credits and they listed all the special appearances and that's what I added on that "wiki" article. But, some of them are listed in the article's so I think maybe for now there should be a ref tag to all the special appearances that was listed on those articles. And keep the rest still present but without a ref tag for now. AnnieTigerChucky (talk) 21:44, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

I'm just pointing out that you can't cite something to the New York Times if the New York Times didn't say it; a ref tag is used to show the source of information. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:07, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

That's why I listed it each separately to the special appearances since not all of special appearences are on NYTimes, and some of them listed that I cited that might not look like it came from NYTimes, such as Polly Draper, but it did it says her role was Ellyn part of the "thirysomething cast." AnnieTigerChucky (talk) 22:13, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Blatant Vandalism

I see that there is blatant vandalism on the page, such as it says that Alex is an alchoholic when he's actually addicted to soda, and the fact that it says that Nat is sent to a psychiatric facility at the end. 70.181.81.245 (talk) 02:43, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

Right, thanks, i will try to edit it to the truth asap --Tokuma (talk) 12:34, 10 June 2008 (UTC)