Talk:The Marshall School

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[edit] Academics

I'm sorry, but this paragraph seems as if it were written for advertising reasons only. It's like the schools mission statement, which I know is very similarly worded. It's going to have to be redone, or else it might as well be scrapped.


The whole article is like an ad for Marshall. This article needs to be fixed up by someone who has a more npov. Unfortunately, that would mean someone who does not and has never attended Marshall, which means they would know less about the school.Pizzadinosaur 12:58, 2 December 2007 (UTC)

I don't think anyone is going to be "convinced" to go to Marshall by a Wiki page (so calling it an "ad" is ridiculous). Plus, it's all factual, so I don't see the problem.

[edit] NPOV, etc

This entire article needs to be repaired for both NPOV and "advertising". Some of the stuff I've cleaned up was the Our Second Century campaign, which was essentially flaunting Marshall School, and also removed a non-NPOV statement under Athletics.

[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:MarshallSchoolLogo.gif

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BetacommandBot (talk) 16:32, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Notable Alumni

College hockey players should not be considered as famous alumni unless they have achieved a certain legitimate milestone or have won awards. Also, one of the hockey players has not yet enrolled at the school. I have removed these. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 97.112.100.127 (talk) 20:21, 10 April 2008 (UTC)