Talk:The Mark Inside

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I've put a neutrality notice on this page. It's very obviously written by a fan or band member (nothing wrong with that though) and sounds a bit too fan-boyish, "sweat on their writhing bodies" indeed. Since they've got an album coming out, or already out, I won't put this on VFD, but hopefully someone who knows something about the band can tidy it up. Leithp 11:48, Jun 18, 2005 (UTC)

<<< agreed, but if you'd actually seen TMI play a show you would understand that "sweat on their writhing bodies" is actually a factual statement. Would "energtic live show" have suffficed? Maybe...