Talk:The Judy Garland Show
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[edit] GA Review
Hello, I will be reviewing this article. So far it passes the quick fail criteria, so a full review is forthcoming. Any questions, please contact me on my talkpage. Regards. FamicomJL (talk) 21:04, 11 December 2007 (UTC)
[edit] On hold
I will put this article on hold for now, just a few reasons why...
- "Production difficulties beset the series almost from the beginning, from confusion over the selection of a producer to the mass dismissal of members of the production team six weeks into taping." -- This looks like it could be re-written. It's a little confusing sounding.
- "The Judy Garland Show was initially slated to be taped in New York City. The network initially offered the producer's job to Bob Banner, who was at the time producing a series for Garry Moore. Although he was interested, he declined to relocate from the West Coast. Bob Finkel, whose credits included shows for Dinah Shore and Andy Williams, was next approached but similarly refused to relocate. " -- Those sentences could use some citations.
- References 1, 4, 8, 11 and 40 are all references which send the user to imdb, which is not considered a reliable source. Try finding other sources. Those frequently referenced books might be a good start.
After all of these have been fixed, corrected, or done, I will surely pass this article. Please contact me on my talk page with any questions, or/and to tell me when all of thise requirements have been met. Regards FamicomJL (talk) 23:09, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
[edit] GA passed
Congratulations, this article has passed! Good work by all involved! FamicomJL (talk) 06:23, 16 December 2007 (UTC)