Talk:The It Girl

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Howard the Duck|Duck]] 12:44, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
"dangered" is not even a word in the English language. "Danger" is a noun. A verb form would be "endanger", which means to place in danger, but it still makes no sense, unless this is implying that someone physically threatened her because she damaged the school's reputation. I don't know if this is the case or not, since I was reading this article to learn about the character. I was thoroughly confused by the incomprehensible language used, and felt I had to make a comment. This is not meant as an attack, but as an honest request for someone who understands the character to correct the article so that it is useful to those seeking information. 66.25.178.58 (talk) 23:48, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Yes, "endangered" would've been more apt. --Howard the Duck 06:10, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Plot Rehash, or What?

I noticed that the section on the main characters of the series is written in a way that makes it sound more like a plot rehash. I know that some of the information there is relevant to the characters, but for the most part, the events in those sections should be moved to the plot summary or removed altogether. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.133.175.186 (talk) 05:09, 15 May 2008 (UTC)