Talk:The Facts in the Case of M. Valdemar

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[edit] Odd sentence

"In between trance and wakefulness, Valdemar tongue begs to quickly either put him back to sleep him."

I'd edit this if I knew what the last part (of the either/or) is supposed to be, but I haven't read the story. Tales 12:59, 2 December 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for catching that! It's certainly an odd plot element but I think I fixed it so it makes more sense grammatically. Plot-wise, it's odd because it's the tongue that is talking, rather than Valdemar himself. Does it look any better this way? --Midnightdreary 13:16, 2 December 2007 (UTC)