Talk:The Deep Blue Good-by

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Astonishing that an article on a book would contain some of the worst writing imaginable. "McGee works when he has to, almost always only taking jobs when his cash flow is critically low." Four superflous adverbs in one sentence - and three in a row. Wow.

[edit] Move content to Travis McGee article

A lot of the text is not about The Deep Blue Good-by, but about Travis McGee in general and belongs more into that article. ChKa 19:38, 27 November 2006 (UTC)