Talk:The Breathing Method

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WARNING MASSIVE SPOILER

In expanding the synopsis I dropped the part about the patient, Sandra, being decapitated before giving birth, since that's, like, the "final twist" which is the whole point of reading the story, a la a Twilight Zone episode. Any thoughts? --209.149.235.254 20:18, 22 Apr 2004 (UTC)

[edit] Synopsis question

I think the synopsis needs some work - the second paragraph is confusing, and the barkeep from the Bronx is not explained at all. -Elizabennet | talk 22:06, 25 January 2007 (UTC)