Talk:The Beaver (magazine)

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[edit] What the hell is this writing

There is no flow or rythm in the article.It's simply a mesh of disconnected sentences.A horrific task to copyedit.--Mike robert (talk) 16:16, 5 December 2007 (UTC)

The article has since been trimmed somewhat and streamlined as well. Can we please now remove the warning from the top saying that it is "confusing and unclear?" —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.225.139.121 (talk) 19:22, 16 April 2008 (UTC)