Talk:Teras Teknologi
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[edit] Clean up
Sorry, but the English needs significant editing to come up to scratch. Maustrauser 10:25, 14 February 2007 (UTC)
Be specific in your comment and please do not interrupt while i'm still working on it.--Suryasuharman 12:17, 14 February 2007 (UTC)
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- Please sign your posts. May I suggest you ask a native English speaker to look through your article. There are too many grammatical errors for me to comment upon each one specifically. Also ensure that you are not having problems with WP:COI. Maustrauser 11:57, 14 February 2007 (UTC)
Noted and thanks.--Suryasuharman 12:17, 14 February 2007 (UTC)
I'll improve the article further. Appreciate everyone kind input through this discussion box. Appreciate it further if you can let the article as it is for the time being while i go through the whole article for re-editing. --Suryasuharman 12:52, 14 February 2007 (UTC)
Do also note that i've also gone through WP:COI article. The article was created simply to contribute to Wikipedia of the creator of Touch n Go and SmartTAG currently use by 3 million Malaysian. I also note that the article do seem to be biased after several read. Thus appreciate everyone continues input, comments, feedback, suggestion and editing to ensure neutrality of the article created. --Suryasuharman 13:07, 14 February 2007 (UTC)
I have so far wrote based from trusted information and sources (news paper, websites and other articles in Wikipedia itself); appreciate everyone cooperation to do the same when editing the article. --Suryasuharman 13:07, 14 February 2007 (UTC)