Talk:Tenoroon

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This is a great article, well done to the editors. Anyone got a picture? It could do wiht one. Guy 13:16, 20 February 2006 (UTC)

I own the original Wolf tenoroon which is referred to in the article. I've uploaded an image. Anybody with more Wikipedia-fu than I might find a way to make it smaller, or also to link to the rear view at Wolf-tenoroon-rear.jpeg. It would also be nice to see more description and some images of older instruments, particularly Savary, who made a surprising number. Groogle (talk) 02:27, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Cleanup needed

Article tagged for cleanup. It's basically good, nicely informative, but:

• The introduction reads like an essay, not an encyclopedia article, and should be rewritten.
• Throughout, there are problems with grammar, punctuation, confusing passages, and capitalization.
• Then there is the question of whether this article should appear under the title 'Tenoroon' at all. More than just tenoroons are discussed here. I believe it would make more sense to move it (with some consequent revision) to a new Bassoon family article, to which Tenoroon could redirect.

-- Rsholmes 16:43, 20 September 2006 (UTC)

I took out a lot of bad grammar and re-worded some stuff all around, but it definatly still needs work. I agree it is a fairly good article, and I didnt take out the essential facts. Whoever wrote this article did a nice job with thier research! Ageofe 15:47, 22 October 2006 (UTC)