Talk:Ted Wilson

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[edit] This reads like a campaign ad

I was looking something about Utah, and I stumbled upon this article. I wikified it, for the sake of it, but in that process I came to think that it looked like some copied a campaign ad and pasted it without even looking at the result. So I added the "this reads like an advertisement" template. A sentence like "A favorite hobby is watching Utah’s future" is a spin doctor's phrase if there even was one. I can't actually edit the data as I don't know anything about that Mr Wilson, but this article, as it is now, could be summed up as "Vote for him!", even though he's not running for anything at present, as far as I know. Eje211 09:56, 7 August 2007 (UTC)