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[edit] Taser deaths

  • There have been deaths incidental to Taser use, but from what I've heard from a reliable police source there have been no deaths directly caused by a Taser. (Obviously, this fact needs a reference before it's incorporated into the article, but I don't have one to supply. Sorry.) Regards, --Tom S. 00:17, 18 September 2006 (UTC)
  • I have never seen a case of a TASER killing or terminally injuring a person, they are always from conditions that they had before the incident with the police.CommanderOne 21:09, 20 September 2006 (UTC)
  • It's the POV of Taser International that there have been no deaths attributed to the Taser. But, that's contradicted by several official autopsy reports. The Arizona Republic found 18 where it was a factor, four where it was the primary factor, and one where it was the sole cause of death as of 2005. 66.218.190.100 20:00, 30 November 2007 (UTC)
  • Although it only takes one counter-example to prove the obvious falsehood (The Arizona ref http://www.azcentral.com/arizonarepublic/news/articles/0730taser30.html mentioned above provides either several or many), here's another: "Coroner Mike Morris has ruled that the Taser caused [Maurice Cunningham's] death." http://www.certops.com/certops/news/Oct060508.html (fair use quote)
  • Common sense indicates many many more.
  • Such misuse (3 minute shocks) IS a Taser Inc issue because any reasonable designer would have designd it so as to prevent the Instrument (of Torture...) being so grotesquely misused. They should obviously have included a trivial timer chip to limit the shock duration to that supported by the science (pseudo that it may be).

JeffyPooh (talk) 00:19, 31 December 2007 (UTC)

Yesterday, I made Taser a separate article once again, given its high notabiliy and recent international media coverage. I also added a section on notable Taser deaths, since these are one of the reasons Tasers are controversial. The task of identifying them is lengthy, and the three I have listed here are just the first three that came up on a Google search. But I would appreciate if others participate in identifying the most notable ones of all, and sorting them, perhaps by date or amount of media coverage.

If the list exceeds 10-15 or so, perhaps it may be worth splitting this section into a new article. Shaliya waya (talk) 16:20, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

  • The reference to recent Canadian deaths was erroneous, so I have rewritten it. 23skidoo (talk) 15:52, 29 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Notable Taser Deaths Section, Merge discussion


[edit] Suggested merge with Taser controversy

It has been pointed out that my closing of this discussion as an involved party was improper. I acknowledge my error. Flatscan (talk) 04:06, 21 May 2008 (UTC)


[edit] SHOTGUN FIRED TASER MUNITIONS

The article must keep abreast with current developments:

Shotgun Taser™ munitions are a newer development in the field of electric less-than-lethal equipment for law enforcement personnel. A self-contained Taser device is the projectile component of a 12-gauge shotgun cartridge. The projectile's is fired at a relatively slow muzzle velocity, but delivers impact force before the devices electrical probes enter the target's skin and deliver a charge. The device will also shock someone who tries to remove the device from the target. The device will deliver a charge for a short period of time allowing officers to take a suspect into custody. The range of this weapon is many times further than that of the standard taser. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 63.226.104.225 (talk) 19:49, 4 December 2007 (UTC)

  • The above info needs reliable source which ought to be properly cited for its inclusion in this article. --Poeticbent talk 20:39, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
  • I found an article on Taser's website about the XREP (eXtended Range Electronic Projectile). I think it could be its own article or added to the bottom of the current Taser article. Somebody better at making templates should try it out.Rachelskit (talk) 18:53, 12 December 2007 (UTC)

http://www.taser.com/products/law/Pages/XREP.aspx

http://www.policeone.com/police-products/less-lethal/taser/press-releases/81387/

http://www.prnewswire.com/cgi-bin/stories.pl?ACCT=104&STORY=/www/story/02-14-2006/0004281420&EDATE

I suggest moving the XREP information to TASER International#Wireless long-range electric shock weapon. It appears that the XREP delivers an electric shock like a Taser, but it is otherwise quite different. Flatscan (talk) 21:21, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

Here's a video that shows more info on XREP.

gizmodo.com/gadgets/owwwww!/video-of-xrep-wireless-taser-shotgun-shocking-some-dude-276481.php

BOB WAS NOT HERE! (Devrit) 03:02, 19 April 2008 (UTC)

I copied the XREP information to TASER International#XREP, then removed it from the lead. If there are no objections to the move, I will archive this discussion and add links between the two Talk pages. Flatscan (talk) 18:19, 27 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Suggested merge with TASER International


[edit] Affecting the Heart

Would a taser not affect the heart's own electrical system (Does it use too low a current to affect this?), or is there some kind of frequency / wave alteration that prevents it? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.141.248.117 (talk) 23:24, 18 January 2008 (UTC)

I haven't read any product literature or documentation from Taser that mentions relevant design considerations. Since whether Tasers affect the heart and in which situations heart stimulation may occur are disputed, there is some relevant information at Taser controversy. Flatscan (talk) 00:13, 21 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Suggested merge with Taser controversy again


[edit] Taser studies

CBC News last week reported that a number of studies that conclude Tasers do no harm were actually paid for by TASER International. I saw the report on The National and don't know if it's online but we should probably check to see if there are any sources (eg in newspaper articles etc) in regards to the funding of the studies that are cited in the article. CBC said the Arizona Republic has run an expose on TASER and I believe the articles examined the funding of the studies as well as TASER's attempts to dissuade coroners and scientists from finding TASER responsible for deaths or injuries. Does anyone have access to this Arizona Republic series? Reggie Perrin (talk) 20:59, 4 February 2008 (UTC)

Regarding the studies' funding, I know that a recent IEEE study/report (not in the article, I think) was funded substantially by TASER International. I couldn't find the link, but I remember that the author took care to disclose and explain the nature of the funding. The Bozeman study was funded by the National Institute of Justice (source already in the article).
There are two Arizona Republic articles from 2005 mentioned in related articles Taser controversy#Deaths and injuries and TASER International#Criticism. The second criticizes TASER for downplaying its involvement in research, so I think it is the exposé you mention. The articles do not have "Related articles" links, but there are a large number of results when searching that site for "Taser". The Arizona Republic has covered TASER for a long time, including a detailed examination of coroner reports from 2001 (IIRC) that has since been removed from their site. Flatscan (talk) 02:32, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
The IEEE Spectrum article was co-written in two parts by Mark W. Kroll and Patrick Tchou, with an introduction by Sandra Upson. Tchou explains the nature of the funding:
Taser International covered the costs of the testing equipment and the costs of laboratory use, but none of Taser's funding covered my time or that of any other physicians involved in the studies.[1]
Flatscan (talk) 21:46, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Where does the taser get its power?

I can't find info on where a taser gets its power. Is it battery operated? If so, what sort of battery, and how long do they last? Are they rechargeable batteries? Or is the taser attached to a vehicle or plugged into a wall so that it limits the useful range of the weapon to whatever you can get to within the length of the cord? (I see a coiled cord coming from the back of the taser in the photo.) Thanks to anyone who can add that info to the article. Elf | Talk 19:25, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

Internal batteries. The electrodes that penetrate a tased individual get their power from the thin wires that run back to the TASER unit. There have been cases where body armor defeats a taser, though insulating the electrodes and preventing them from making direct contact with the skin of the tased individual. Can't say how long the batteries last, though. Yaf (talk) 21:12, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
There are two types of batteries (cells, actually). Lithium primary (non-rechargeable) cells and Nickel Metal Hydride (NiMH) secondary rechargeable cells. For lithium cells, there are 2 each 3 Volt cells. (Internal circuitry steps this voltage up.) Lithium cells are typically good for 195 uses at 5 seconds per use, assuming normal storage temperatures. (Increase the temperature for very long to above 140 F, though, and the number of shots is likely considerably less.) In addition to the fully deployed use (firing electrodes that penetrate the target), there is also a direct drive mode, where the electrodes are simply held up against the target. There is also a "fear" mode, where the unit is simply zapped in front of the person, "encouraging" them to surrender without being Tased :-) Battery life is internally monitored, to indicate the number of tases remaining. NiMH batteries are rechargeable. The voltage at the electrodes is typically about 50 kV open circuit, dropping to about 1.2 kV peak under load, while delivering about 2.1 mA of current, with a pulse rate of 19 pulses per second. Incidentally, it only takes about 1/20 of a mA (0.05 mA) across a person's heart to kill a person. Depending on how the current from the electrodes actually distributes through a person's body, there is a finite possibility of killing someone each time a Taser is used. But, as long as the current across the heart doesn't go above 0.05 mA, the Taser shouldn't directly kill the target. Yaf (talk) 21:48, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for your information. Could you provide sources so that we may add it to the article? Flatscan (talk) 04:06, 3 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] History → Development

I suggest renaming the History section to Development and trimming its content to focus on the development of the Taser device.

Example items for inclusion:

  • Original invention by Cover
  • Switch from gunpowder to compressed nitrogen propellant (and resulting reclassification as non-firearm)
  • X26 and "shaped pulse"

Concerns:

  • Danger of reading like TASER PR copy: materials from TASER will probably be most cited, but there are secondary sources, including sources already used in the current History section.
  • POV shift resulting from trimming: the 2007 Canada paragraph would be moved, probably to Criticism. However, a relevant reliable source could be included, e.g., "TASER claims that 'shaped pulse' is more effective, but critics claim that it increases incidence of injury."
  • Content fork with TASER International#History: a fork should be easy to avoid if effort is made to focus on the main subject of each article.

Flatscan (talk) 01:44, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] "Taser" and "Taser controversy" yet again

I'm not going to suggest a merge after it's been defeated twice, but I do suggest that too much of the content in the "Taser" article is about the same subjects as in the "controversy" article. If the articles can't be merged, then I think the main article should be shortened by removing removing most of the references to dangers of the device, and any other controversial points, that are outside the "Taser controversy" section.

--207.176.159.90 (talk) 02:02, 3 May 2008 (UTC)

That material should be moved to the Taser controversy article so that the two articles better fit the WP:Summary style guideline.
  • Removing non-duplicated content outright should not be done. Similar content (e.g. study results) should be moved, then edited for duplication.
  • It is appropriate to have a brief summary in the Taser article. Something like "Taser International claims that Tasers are safe, but critics disagree" (well-cited) would be fine.
  • When moving content between articles, please consider leaving a clear edit trail. I prefer to move content unchanged, then edit at the destination.
Flatscan (talk) 17:03, 3 May 2008 (UTC)


[edit] Style

[edit] Capitalization of noun

The most common style on Wikipedia is "Taser", with the exception of the title and lead of TASER International. Flatscan (talk) 18:48, 10 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Verb

  • Taser/taser
  • Tase/tase, backformed from Tase-r, generally uncapitalized

I'm not sure if there's a clear "winner" by current Wikipedia usage. As of the UCLA Taser incident (November 2006), usage in news articles was inconsistent. Following the University of Florida Taser incident (September 2007, "Don't tase me, bro!"), popular usage supports "tase". "Tase" appears to have been in use by law enforcement prior to both of these incidents. Flatscan (talk) 18:48, 10 May 2008 (UTC)

  • tased/tasered

It looks to me that tasered is far more often used than tased. A search on Google will proof that. Try http://www.google.ca/search?hl=en&q=tased (248.000 hits)

and tasered: http://www.google.ca/search?hl=en&q=tasered (785.000 hits)

or compare google news tasered (about 800 hits) vs. tased (about 450). Looks like we have a clear winner, right? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.69.25.254 (talk) 14:26, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

My search results concur with yours. I was under the impression that "tase" had become more common than "taser" recently, but it appears that "taser" is still in common use. I prefer "tase" due to its use by law enforcement and its easy disambiguation between the device (Taser) and the activation (tase). Flatscan (talk) 04:18, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

You suggest that the verb "to taser" is dying out, yet it is increasingly more common than "to tase". Therefore now is the time to use the already far more common "to taser" (as Google will confirm). It's easy to circumvent "disambiguation" by using "Taser" (capital T) for the electroshock gun, and "taser" (small t) for the verb. No problems of "disambiquation" in the past tense either.

Law enforcement in Canada and New Zealand consistently prefers the usage of the verb "to taser" and also many US law enforcement have used "to taser" in the many interviews. Given the scope of usage, the solution to circumvent "disambiguation", and it's general usage by the general public at large as well as world-wide law enforcement the verb "to taser" would most likely be the most preferable one. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.69.25.254 (talk) 23:48, 31 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] RFC: Criticism

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My understanding is that wikipedia generally frowns upon segregating criticism into a separate section of an article and that editors are instead encouraged to integrate any criticism throughout the article in order to ensure balance and NPOV. I don't think the current state of this article, where a "criticism" section is at the very end, is consistent with WP:NPOV policy. See in particular [[2]] "Examples that may warrant attention include: "Segregation" of text or other content into different regions or subsections, based solely on the apparent POV of the content itself;". I'm also concerned about the extent to which critical information has been shuffled off to Taser controversy. While it might not be practical to put all of the information contained in the Taser controversies article into this one there's no reason to include every single incident involving Taser in the main article, certainly key information such as the conclusion of scientific studies into Taser belong in the main article. I suggest finding other ways to spin off articles off of the main one. Having a Taser/Taser controversies division isn't consistent with NPOV. Reggie Perrin (talk) 13:44, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

The article can be split along criteria other than controversy vs non-controversy. Splitting it along these lines is generally discouraged since it's incompatible with the principle of WP:NPOV. Can we think of other subtopics that can be spun-off instead? Reggie Perrin (talk) 18:06, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

Original split, August 2007: diff

Previous discussions:

Flatscan (talk) 02:10, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Discussion

[edit] Merger

This merge has been discussed a few times (linked above), most recent and longest discussion at #Suggested merge with Taser controversy again, which I closed as no consensus after it petered off. I've made my arguments there, but I will highlight a few points:

  • I've read Wikipedia:Criticism (essay) a few times, and I think that full integration should not be done for these articles, as I have noticed a tendency for criticism to be integrated into questionable locations. This does not intend to exclude all criticism from the article. Consider these hypothetical (I have no sources for them) examples based in Taser#Function:
    • Inappropriate: The electrodes are pointed to penetrate clothing and barbed to prevent removal once in place. These projectiles can cause serious injury if they strike the face or eyes of the target. —short factual description, no need to balance pro-Taser POV; criticism refers to a rare event, may be mentioned in controversy article/section
    • Appropriate: Taser International claims that "Shaped Pulse" dramatically increases the Taser's effectiveness, but critics say that the technology is linked to an increased rate of injury and death. —pro-Taser PR, reasonable to balance; criticism should be expanded elsewhere
  • WP:POVFORK has been invoked repeatedly. I responded with some combination of Wikipedia:Content forking#Article spinouts - "Summary style" articles, Wikipedia:Summary style#Avoidance of POV forks, and Wikipedia:Article size#Breaking out trivial or controversial sections, and asked for specific NPOV violations besides the existence of two separate articles.

Flatscan (talk) 02:58, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

While the merge has been discussed before I don't believe it's every been proposed through the proper channels ie one that would allow for a community-wide discussion. The discussions have involved a handful of people and, reading over them, it is not clear that when it involved more than two editors that the consensus was not to merge. Reggie Perrin (talk) 03:04, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
In the first merge discussion [3] the person who closed the discussion and concluded there was "no consensus" was User:Flatscan. As he was most certainly not an uninvolved editor but very much an advocate of one side his involvement in closing the discussion and rendering a verdict was inappropriate. Flatscan also closed the second discussion and the third as well! Moreover, there was no attempt to bring in the community in any of the three discussions. As far as I can tell the merger proposals were not mentioned on the RFC page or at Wikipedia:Proposed mergers. Moreover, while the first two "discussions" involved two or three people at the most, the last involved a slightly larger number of contributors, four, however as far as I can see 3 were in favour of merger and 1 was opposed so, if anything, there was a consensus to merge. Nevertheless, Flatscan closed the discussion concluded "no consensus" when he should have asked an uninvolved admin to close. My point is that if Flatscan is suggesting that this has already been discussed and settled - he's wrong. There has never been a proper RFC or proper proposal to merge and those that have existed were improperly closed by an involved editor. Moreover, if one looks at either the third discussion alone or all the discussions combined there actually is a consensus to merge. Reggie Perrin (talk) 03:34, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
IIRC, the first merge discussion was started after an editor dropped {{merge}} tags onto the articles without creating a Talk section. I created the section, linked it appropriately, and participated in the discussion. I admit that I improperly closed it with a conclusion and as an involved party, but (please AGF) I was ignorant of and could not find the relevant policy/guideline. Two new merge discussions were started within a month of closing, so the impact of the improper close was limited.
Regarding the long discussion, I closed it as no consensus after waiting one month with no new comments (Feb 2008), suggesting closing as no consensus, responding to your suggestion of an RFC two weeks later, and finally closing two weeks after that. If you had suggested an RfC more strongly or insisted after my reply, I would have asked you to file it (citing my unfamiliarity with the process) and participated. My understanding, then and now, is that a discussion may be closed as no consensus if there are no objections, even by an involved party. No consensus means exactly that – consensus was not determined and the discussion can be reopened at any time. Regarding 3 versus 1, consensus is not a vote. Flatscan (talk) 04:44, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
You're a relatively new user so my intention isn't to accuse you of wrongdoing - my point is just that the prior discussions weren't properly conducted or concluded (and in the third case especially your "no consensus" finding is dubious) so they shouldn't be used to argue that this matter has already been settled. I'm just saying that completely removing "controversial" material from this article and dumping it in that article isn't appropriate. At a minimum, the major controversies should be added to the main Taser article, with the fork article spelling out the situation in more detail. eg the studies section should be restored to this article and elaborated in the other article. Excited delirium should be introduced here and discussed in more detail elsewhere etc. The habit of excising negative information from this article wholesale and dumping it elsewhere so that this article has an overall positive POV on Taser is not an acceptable practice. Reggie Perrin (talk) 04:58, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
Thank you for your clarification. Flatscan (talk) 18:16, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
I support the view of Reggie Perrin and others that the taser articles need to be merged and that it was inappropriate for a judgment on the issue to be made by a partisan editor, Flatscan. In line with my earlier comment, I recommend that this overloaded heap of authoritarian propaganda be taken in hand by an unbiassed administrator or experienced editor and reduced to a single comprehensive article of greatly reduced bulk. Bjenks (talk) 05:10, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

← The organization of "Controversy" differs slightly from "Criticism". In the current structure, a disputed topic (e.g. safety) has both sides presented at once, rather than all the pro-Taser POV in the Taser article, and all the anti-Taser "criticism" relegated to the Taser controversy article. If the current article fails NPOV, it could be addressed by moving pro-Taser content out of Taser. Regarding recent edits, I moved Safety concerns (diff) earlier this month, following Wikipedia:Summary style and leaving what I believe to be an NPOV summary. Please note that the content moved included pro-Taser material such as the Wake Forest/Bozeman study, the Potomac Institute study, and the Lakkireddy pacemaker study. Are there specific objections to these edits? Flatscan (talk) 18:08, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

This article receives ten times the traffic (literally) that Taser controversy receives. It's not insignificant that sections like "Taser deaths" and "studies" that contain information that is not favourable to Taser have been removed to the other article. The effect is essentially to bury this information. I don't see how that is at all justifiable particularly when there are a number of articles on wikipedia that are longer than Taser and Taser controversy combined. If "Taser controversy" is an NPOV article than merging that NPOV material into this article cannot make this article POV yet it is a false claim of POV that has been used to move the material from this article to that one. Generally, we don't make an article NPOV by removing content but by adding content. However, if the article is too long perhaps it would be preferable to move the more trivial material to a subarticle and retain the more important facts in the main article? If you look up Taser in factiva and Lexis-Nexis you'll see that it is the material on studies and deaths that is most prominent so it belongs in the main article. Also, which "Taser controversy" is that article talking about? It looks like a catch-all for various different issues that are "controversial". Reggie Perrin (talk) 00:04, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
Responses to some of your points:
  • Traffic statistics: 10 times the traffic is surprising to me, but it is plausible and bolsters your argument. What is your source, and does it cover internal wikilinks from Taser to Taser controversy?
  • Article length: According to Wikipedia:Article size#A rule of thumb, their combined length falls into a gray area. My point is that overall length should be given some consideration.
  • Moving material: I think that moving content between the two articles correctly can maintain NPOV balance. Can you be more specific about which edits (diffs, please) have been justified by "a false claim of POV"? Do you mean my recent edits that I mentioned above?
  • Taser controversy is named per Wikipedia:Naming conventions#Prefer singular nouns.
Your recent edits (diffs: [4], [5]) concern me somewhat. You are permitted to be WP:BOLD, and the edits are simple copy/pastes. However, they seem to be covered by this ongoing discussion and open RfC. Flatscan (talk) 19:33, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
    • My point about Taser controversy is that it's a catch-all. Reading it there are actually a number of different matters brought up that are not necessarily related. Splitting an article on the basis of criticism/non-criticism or controversy/non-controversy is not ideal, particularly when there is not a singular controversy. I've seen biographical articles where a particular controversy is spun off into a subarticle but I don't think this is the same thing.
    • Traffic statistics for April 2008 are as follows. Taser 29,754 hits; Taser controversy 4,348 so not quite 10 times but still quite a huge difference.
    • I see I may have overstated my argument about the way to close merger discussions. I thought an uninvolved admin had to close them but I see now that policy is unclear in this area so I apologize. Nevertheless, it's definitely better if an uninvolved person does it.
    • I don't think it's necessary to merge all the "controversy" article into this one but I think key issues such as deaths, legal issues and scientific studies need to be mentioned in the main article - particularly as much of the media interest in Taser, judging by Factiva and Lexis-Nexis, has been around those issues. Moving them to another article makes it look like we're trying to bury negative information and the fact that a pro-Taser study was included in the move doesn't change that. Not mentioning "excited delirium" in the main Taser article would also be a glaring omission. Reggie Perrin (talk) 05:56, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for the traffic statistics (that's a substantial difference) and the apology. They are much appreciated. Regarding the controversies, there's the big one Safety, which can be considered to contain both deaths and studies, and lesser ones like Torture. Many criticisms of alleged inappropriate Taser use stem from safety concerns, and the legal issues are mainly wrongful death suits and Taser International suing to "suppress" reports that directly blame Tasers for deaths. Flatscan (talk) 01:56, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
Let me re-iterate that I would prefer to merge all the Taser information into one article.
Flatscan has convinced me that many people prefer shorter articles, and that it may be possible to make more than one excellent NPOV encyclopedia article out of Taser-related information.
So I am willing to compromise and divide the Taser information into 2 articles -- as long as the result does not isolate all the negative information into a less-prominent article, giving the appearance of a POV fork.
I think Wikipedia:Article size#Breaking out trivial or controversial sections supports my desire to discourage giving articles names that include "controversy", such as Taser controversy, and instead "Consider other organizational principles for splitting the article".
Let me ask again: other than your goal of keeping the article from becoming "too big", what other criteria do you have for preferring one division over another?
How about:
  • an article about just the device itself -- perhaps Taser hardware, analogous to central processing unit
  • an article about just the company -- TASER International
  • an article about everything else -- its intended use, actual use, history, notable users, notable people it has been used on, promoters, critics, public perception, etc. -- perhaps Taser history, analogous to History of general purpose CPUs.
  • the "Taser" article becomes a disambiguation page listing the above 3 articles.
--68.0.124.33 (talk) 04:26, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for joining this discussion. I assume that you're the same editor who participated in #Suggested merge with Taser controversy again above. Could you clarify to which comments you refer with "your goal of keeping the article from becoming 'too big'"? Having a disambiguation page feels odd, and removing it from your suggested organization reintroduces the problem of which article should be most prominent. I'll have to think about your suggestion more. Flatscan (talk) 03:02, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
I agree with the anon that if one consolidated "Taser" article is too long it is preferable to break out historical or trivial information into separate articles rather than material related to "controversy". Information and events that may be viewed in a critical light should be included in the main article rather than in subsidiary articles. However, that doesn't mean that we have to list every single Taser-related death, for instance, in the main article. Taser should cover the more notable incidents but if there's a long list of incidents the full list can be in a sub-article called Taser-related deaths or perhaps Post-tasering deaths if that's more NPOV. Reggie Perrin (talk) 22:08, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Excited delirium

User:Reginald Perrin recently added the section Taser#"Excited delirium (diff). I think that the section is undue weight – used incorrectly Flatscan (talk) 17:52, 24 May 2008 (UTC) and would be better placed in Excited delirium and Taser controversy.

While the first source mentions Tasers, it links excited delirium to in-custody deaths and alleged police brutality in general:

Controversy over the increasing use of Tasers and the attention accorded in-custody deaths is, after all, why most are here, in Guelph at a conference hosted by the local police force on recognizing the signs of excited delirium.

While the Taser draws most of the heat, debate over precisely why people die after a brisk battle with police to restrain them -- whether using a Taser or not -- is growing as more attention is being paid to a condition that is only now being popularized.

I agree that a link between Tasers and excited delirium should be mentioned somewhere (not necessarily in this article), but its current placement in a separate section implies that the link is stronger than it is. It's probably notable that Taser International refers to excited delirium in its advertising and product literature, and it is further notable that Taser faces criticism for doing so. However, the mention alone may not be uncommon for a company supplying control products to law enforcement. ZARC, a pepper spray manufacturer, makes this paper on excited delirium available on its website (found at Talk:Excited delirium#Plagiarism/POV). Flatscan (talk) 01:54, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

Flatscan's comment that excited deirium should be mentioned "somewhere (not necessarily in this article)" illustrates the problem which is that over the past few months aspects of the article that may reflect negatively on Taser have been moved to other articles. In regards to excited delirium it's not just a question of Taser including the concept in its literature, its that there is widespread and credible criticism that the company uses the concept to explain away Taser-related deaths and put the blame for those fatalities on something other than the Taser and that this deflection of blame is pseudo-scientific at best. Both of the citations I use in the excited delirium section are not tangential to Taser, they are from articles that are primarily about Taser and its use or misuse of the concept. The allegation that Taser is promoting a scientifically dubious concept to exonerate itself of responsiblity is not a fringe theory as suggested by Flatscan's invocation of WP:Undue weight on my talk page. It's been made by mainstream and credible scientific sources - quoted in the article is a police psychologist testifying before a judicial inquire - and is a prominent issue regarding Taser so Undue Weight does not apply. What I haven't included in the article yet is the fact that Taser has used the concept of "excited delirium" to defend itself in wrongful death lawsuits and in a lawsuit against a coroner who listed Taser as the cause of death in one person's case. A combined factiva search of "taser and excited delirium" returns 785 hits (!) A combined google search shows 21,600 hits that have both terms. Clearly the concept of "excited delirium" specifically in regards to Taser is notable. Reggie Perrin (talk) 03:23, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
I think we may have had a misunderstanding based on what looks like my misuse of "undue weight" to mean "emphasis that appears to advance a POV". You've thoroughly connected Taser International (company) to excited delirium, but I did not dispute that. I feel that the section implies a strong link between Tasers (weapon) and excited delirium that has not been demonstrated. Your source that I quoted above mentions 35 police-related deaths in Ontario found to have had excited delirium as a factor, with only one involving a Taser, although more recent deaths may have been excluded. Flatscan (talk) 03:57, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
I can find other sources if you like. According to Factiva there are 785 news articles that are potential reliable sources. Taser International discusses excited delirium in relation to the Taser (weapon) so yes, it's relevant to this article, very much so. In any case, if you're actual concern is with POV then I want to point out that excluding all references in the article to "excited delirium" despite the fact that the concept is prominently linked with Taser is a POV by omission. Excluding information that may be seen as negative is POV. One doesn't make the excited delirium reference NPOV by removing it, one does it by ensuring that both sides are put forward. Reggie Perrin (talk) 04:02, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Balance, relative length

It seems to me that one of the core issues is what balance of content is appropriate. For example, I think that critical content constituting 2/3 of the Taser (weapon) article would be too much. Absolutely none (including zero links) would be too little. Any thoughts? Flatscan (talk) 02:09, 7 June 2008 (UTC)

I can't find any evidence of a strict equation for determining balance. What balance generally means is that we tell both sides (though with an eye to WP:UNDUE) but don't remove material arbitrarily in order to achieve balance. Reggie Perrin (talk) 22:25, 8 June 2008 (UTC)