Talk:T Lavitz

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Lot's of great information about one of my favorite keyboardists. However, as a 9th grade English teacher, I give it a C- at best. My suggestions: Break up the article to several paragraphs - perhaps by time of life or decade - much easier to digest. Change the verb tenses to all be in the past (Lavitz grew up in New Jersey, not he grows up, etc.). Just some ideas - top notch musician deserves top notch Wiki entry, no?