Talk:Sword of the Spirits

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Bloodwen doesn't come over to "consumate the alliance." The text suggests she came under her own initiative: "I was curious," she says. And the phrasing is open to misinterpretation. (Beavis: Heh-heh, he said "consumate.") 71.199.114.44 17:14, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

I couldn't think of a better way to put it. Certainly it is clear a wedding lies somewhere in the planned future at the time of Blodwen's arrival in the City. But if you want to rewrite the sentence by all means go for it! Ellsworth 22:53, 5 November 2007 (UTC)