Talk:Swivel New Media

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A "speedy deletion" notice was added to this page and I have added a "hangon" so that I can edit the article to conform to all wiki standards. If anyone can assist me in editing the article to conform to spec I would appreciate. You'll have to forgive my ignorance as I am new to editing and posting on Wikipedia. Any help or suggestions offered will be greatly appreciated. I will have some changes made to it shortly, possibly before the next review. In any case please let me know what I can do to fix the article and we'll go from there.

Best,

Swivel1 04:15, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

• The best thing to do would be to edit it so that it does not read like an advertisement for the company. I was reading this page before it got marked as a candidate for speedy deletion, and I was going to mark it for "cleanup" as an advertisement. --Strangerer 04:25, 28 February 2007 (UTC)
• To clarify, think about maintaining a neutral point of view when editing this article. --Strangerer 04:27, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments. I have removed several external links and have also removed entire sentences I felt appeared to be less neutral than they should be. Please let me know your comments on the current text and feel free to directly edit any of it. ThanksSwivel1 05:05, 28 February 2007 (UTC)

• Looks much better to me now - I feel it can be removed as a candidate for speedy deletion. The article may be in need of additional cleanup, but is no longer in danger of immediate deletion. --Strangerer 05:40, 28 February 2007 (UTC)