Talk:Suzanne Lenglen

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	Suzanne Lenglen is a former featured article. Please see the links under Article milestones below for its original nomination page (for older articles, check the nomination archive) and why it was removed.
	This article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on March 14, 2005.
Article milestones Date Process Result September 16, 2004 Featured article candidate Promoted April 8, 2007 Featured article review Demoted Current Status: Former featured article

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[edit] Connection to Alain Gerbault

Might be interesting to add to the article: [1] - McCart42 06:25, 27 February 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Featured Article?

With that two sentence lead? It also has no inline citations and one reference listed. I wish I was around in the good old days when you could get anything featured. Quadzilla99 05:21, 18 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Featured article review opened

Article is currently in no shape to deserve FA status. —Onomatopoeia 12:05, 6 March 2007 (UTC)

First sentence kills it for me. The phrase "who achieved much success in the French and British women's game" is objectionable on several grounds. (1) I hate the use of 'much'. (2) Is the French game different for the British game? (3) Or is the French and British game different from everywhere else. (4) 'Game' or 'sport'? (5) The whole reads like sports journalism rather than an encyclopaedia article (use of game for example). So, how about achieved success in France and Britain?