Talk:Supercluster
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[edit] Repetition
The second and fifth paragraphs appear to have roughly the same information. I don't consider myself expert enough to judge which paragraph is better therefore I'm not comfortable simply deleting one or the other. Can an expert delete/rewrite as apprpriate.Finewinescotland 18:16, 9 December 2006 (UTC)
- Both the 5th paragraph and the 2nd paragraph were added by User:WilliamKF, as was the reference to the paper by Hu et al. The 5th paragraph turns out to be the first paragraph of the paper by Hu et al. The second paragraph looks like a rewrite of the 5th paragraph. I'm guessing WillamKF may have copied the paragraph for convenience, rewritten it so that it was not a copyvio, and then simply forgotten to delete the source he was working from. Therefore, I have deleted the 5th paragraph. Cardamon 12:25, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Contradiction
The first sentence of the second paragraph seems to contradict the third paragraph. Which of these is correct? TV4Fun 00:42, 15 March 2007 (UTC)
