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This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as stub, and the rating on other projects was brought up to Stub class. BetacommandBot 03:44, 9 November 2007 (UTC)
- Yay. — Dihydrogen Monoxide 06:25, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
[edit] GA review
Sorry this article is being quick failed for being such an awful song ;p, anyway here we go,
- I think everyone knows what a week is so no need to wikilink it
- Removed.
- In an interview with Undercover magazine, "Undercover" is a periodical thus should be in italics
- Done.
- Powderfinger again worked with producer Nick DiDia, who had accompanied the band on previous albums - the "again" is redundant because you say he worked with the band on previous albums after the comma (which albums also) and the repetition of previously is not good, how about something like "Nick Didia returned to the producer's chair after working with the band on the albums, X and Y. Brendan OBrien, who had worked with Didia on (Whatever they worked on goes here), mixed the song in Atlanta Georgia."
- Reworded - the source simply says that OBrien and DiDia worked together...[1]
- Done
- I suggest merging the last two paragraphs in "Recording and production" as they both describe elements of the album
- Merged.
- An acoustic video for "Sunsets"
has also appeared - a song "appearing" sounds wrong how about, An acoustic video for "Sunsets" was featured on the etc
- Featured it is.
- Removed.
- This review [2] is not by a critic it is by a user of the site, i made the same mistake too awhile ago ;p
- Reworded to emphasise contributor, but kept.
- no need to link music video, anyone reading this article will know what one is
- Fixed.
- The video shows one of the King's ten son's -> sons
- Fixed.
- For the sound sample you will need a better caption than "20 second sample from "Sunsets"", something like "20 second sample from "Sunsets" showing the aggressive lyrics and rythm as said by reviewer of magazine/website.
- Added.
- Since the Sputnik review is gone i suggest merging the review paragraphs together and create a paragraph for the chart positions and awards, and remove the tables. Up to you though but since there is such a small amount of positions and awards it may be better to write it.
- Nah, I prefer it as a table.
- 2004 ARIA ARIA Music Awards Best Group Nominated - If they were nominated for Best Group i take it the award does not relate to this song receiving the award?
- See the source - song is mentioned alongside "Best Group"
- Youtube links are copyright infringements as they are uploaded by a normal user, not the official record company. Just use "Sunsets" video clip - Powerfinger, Record Company or something
- OK.
- [3] is not a reliable source, what is it sourcing btw?
- It was sourcing track listing, but I removed it as there was another one.
- With authors in references the last name comes first so Jason MacNeil should be, Macneil, Jason
That be all, feel free to message me if you disagree with anything.
- Fixed
M3tal H3ad (talk) 06:33, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
- Fixed stuff up. — Dihydrogen Monoxide 06:54, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
- Pass. M3tal H3ad (talk) 07:10, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
