Talk:Structure implies multiplicity

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[edit] 1st paragraph

The first paragraph is confusing and horrible to read. DoItAgain 13:25, 19 August 2006 (UTC)

How so? Hyacinth 21:33, 19 August 2006 (UTC)

Well, the grammar is bad, the sentences are too long and convoluted and technical terms are not defined clearly and unambiguously. Remember that the general reader will need a clear and simple introduction to the subject. --Tdent 18:01, 17 September 2006 (UTC)

I agree. I don't understand the concept and I read it several times over. If I wasn't set on understanding it I wouldhave given up a long time ago.--SurrealWarrior 14:05, 18 January 2007 (UTC)