Talk:Strawberry Panic!/Archive 4
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Move Etoile section?
I'm thinking of moving the Etoile section to be a subheading of schools, what do you think? Kyaa the Catlord 17:51, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
- I think it's a good idea. Just let me edit the section a bit and I'll do it.--Juhachi 18:16, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
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- Ooops. I'll self-revert. Kyaa the Catlord 18:18, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
Trivia
I removed the trivia section, mainly because it's lack of enclyopedic worth. If anyone disagrees, feel free to add it back in. Highway Return to Oz... 11:57, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
Anime Section
The anime section starts off with a "main article" link to the list of episodes. This is misleading to readers as the list does not exactly discuss the anime. A little hard to articulate what I'm trying to say here, but what I mean is that a fitting use of the "main article" template would be if we had one dedicated article for the animated series (which may detail differences from other media and things specific to the anime), in which it may be named something like "Strawberry Panic! (anime)". The link should either be incorporated in the anime section differently or remain at the top but with a different template. --Remy Suen 14:53, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
Another GA try
Shall we? Kyaa the Catlord 14:15, 18 September 2006 (UTC)
- Well...I suppose we can try. We still haven't resolved much of what was left with the last one as the Media section's subsections of Light Novel, Manga and Video Game are still sub-par in information. But I don't know where else to get the info from because I don't have access to those media types other than the first volume of the manga which I've downloaded. -- (十八|talk) 03:39, 19 September 2006 (UTC)
The original media
Only the beginning of the article mentions the short stories
- "Strawberry Panic! began as a collection of short stories serialized in the Japanese bishōjo magazine Dengeki G's Magazine"
I think it would make more sense if there was more information on these stories was added to the media section, because the short stories are the "original media" which gave life to the other works.
-- Psi edit 21:39, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
- I was the one that included that information, and I obtained it through a post on the AnimeSuki forum I came across back in May when I first started building up this article. Here it is, where it states:
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- Strawberry Panic! started as a short novel (short stories) being serialized in the bishoujo magazine Dengeki G's Magazine (bishoujo magazines are aimed at male audience).
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- The short stories finished serializing in the bishoujo magazine Dengeki G's Magazine, but the short story novel was not collected in a tankoubon.
I'll go and site the source in the article, but unless the Japanese Wikipedia article can be translated, we can't go very much farther into the short stories. --(十八|talk) 01:16, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
Anime to Manga Differences
Quoting the current content:
"Major differences between the anime and manga mostly centers around the plot and character interaction. The manga investigates the physical aspects of the lesbian themes further than the anime, which focuses mostly on their relationships together."
Are there more? KyuuA4 20:41, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
- From what I've seen from the manga, it seems that the plot progresses much more quickly and we find out about Kaori rather soon. Character designs are a bit different, but that's like most manga to anime conversions so it's not a major thing to list. I've only read about 8 of the manga chapters, and another thing was that the Etoile Election process is a major plot point from the first or second chapter on while the anime waits until the later part of the series to touch on it for the dramatic effect. However, there are still the Amane/Hikari and Nagisa/Shizuma pairings though Nagisa and Shizuma are participating in the election process, unlike in the anime where it was with Nagisa and Tamao. Other than all that, I can't think of anything else. --(十八|talk) 02:01, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
Astraea Hill name change
Per the official Seven Sea's Entertainment SP! website it is shown that they have chosen to translate the name as Astrea instead of the more correct Astraea. I have changed the name in the article to reflect this.--(十八) 19:58, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
GA re-nomination
After improving this article some, I have re-nominated this article for Good Article status. --(十八) 07:30, 18 February 2007 (UTC)
GA On Hold
This article has been put on hold as this article could use a reactions and criticisms section and possibly other sections that are indirectly related to the anime to help show a more out-of-universe perspective in the article. This article is otherwise very good and is GA worthy. If you feel that this review is in error feel free to take it to WP:GA/R. Tarret 22:51, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
Ga Passed
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