User:Stepshep/Pectus/Lead
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As per WP:LEAD I am proposing that we collaborate to either shorten the lead paragraph of pectus excavatum or somehow restate the information later in the article. Thanks! Stepshep (talk) 23:02, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Original Lead (do not edit)
Pectus excavatum (A Latin term meaning:Hollowed chest) is a congenital deformity of the sternum, which is pressed into the chest, resulting in a "caved-in" or sunken appearance. It is usually present at birth, but in some rare cases does not appear until the onset of puberty.
The deformity is sometimes considered to be a cosmetic rather than functional problem. However, recent studies have shown cases where pectus excavatum has impaired cardiac and respiratory function, and sometimes caused pain in the chest and back.[1] Psychologically, untreated patients, especially youths, can experience negative psychosocial effects throughout their lives, avoiding activities where a shirt is not worn. Public awareness of Pectus Excavatum is limited, so youths suffering of the disorder may feel very alone. Media coverage has been scarce.
The condition usually progresses during the time of rapid bone growth in the early teenage years. Estimates for the prevalence of this condition range from one in 150 to 1000 children. Though the cause is not certain, the male/female ratio is 3 to 1, and occurrences of the condition in family members have been reported in 35% to 45% of cases.[2][3] These features may suggest a genetic component may be involved, although some authorities believe the condition occurs in a sporadic fashion.[4] Incidence is especially high among patients with inherited connective tissue disorders such as Marfan syndrome.
Pectus excavatum is sometimes referred to as "cobbler's chest", "funnel chest", "sunken chest", "chest bowl", or simply a "dent".
[edit] Revised Lead (please edit)
Pectus excavatum (A Latin term meaning:Hollowed chest) is a congenital deformity of the sternum, which is pressed into the chest, resulting in a "caved-in" or sunken appearance. It is usually present at birth, but in some rare cases does not appear until the onset of puberty. yaddayaddayadda