Talk:Steven Bellamy

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I have removed the remarks, which I agree may have been too personal.

I rated the article and fixed the categories (there is a system to them). There may be a couple of others he belongs in. What are his ranks in Judo, Aikido and Karate - instructor rank does not say very much.Peter Rehse 02:43, 11 January 2007 (UTC)

The sources are still not mentioned. 83.241.173.88 10:10, 11 January 2007 (UTC)

We will leave it as it is right now. I'll follow up when I get to Japan in the spring.

I have added the Controversy section. I will be adding footnotes and refernces to it as I learn how to do them. I have quite a few citations from the Nagoya University law school and also to the criminal code of Japan. Please note - I have the subjects permission to write this entry.

I am leaving for Japan on 25th March so I will gather the relevant information and pickup when I get back. I already have two confirmed sources. I will also be visiting Nagoya University.

I attempted to Wikify the article in order to "make it better" or read more like an encyclopedia entry. I edited some of the wordings/wiki tags- these can be left simply as the names (or headings) of the articles- leaving the clarity of meaning to those exterior articles. Sources other than Mr. Bellamy's website on Shinto Muso Ryu and other Wikipedia articles would be nice as well.

Mekugi (talk) 15:57, 9 March 2008 (UTC)